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What Can I say? – by Shola Olawumi

Hi there! Remember my call for submissions? Well, the submissions have been rolling in. This right here is one submitted by Shola Olawumi. He’s a very fine individual; nice and pleasant; more of a lawyer than a writer but hey! who says you have to be a professional writer to get published on sayolori? ๐Ÿ™‚ I find his poem amusing and really sweet in a way. Feel free to leave your thoughts on this piece. Above all, enjoy reading it. I know I did.

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What can I say
To make your day?
Should I say you’re pretty?
And not like ugly Betty.
Or should I say you’re funny
Just like Bugs Bunny?
Maybe I should say you’re kind,
Because thats also on my mind.
I can also say you’re nice,
I just hope you dont melt like ice.
And I really hope calling you a celebrity
Will not later make you a nonentity.
But whatever I say
I just hope it makes your day.

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10 comments on “What Can I say? – by Shola Olawumi

  1. laolu7
    January 8, 2013

    nice…like the end ryhmes, the line of hope calling you a celebrity needs editing…

    • Olori
      January 8, 2013

      Well, that line is a continued sentence. You could take a second look. You’re becoming a regular guest here. Me likey!

  2. sisianu
    January 8, 2013

    Awww Nice!!!

  3. Damola
    January 8, 2013

    A nice and funny poem. Loving d flow.

  4. sholay
    January 8, 2013

    tanx guys

  5. teebell90
    January 14, 2013

    waoh a greAT Poem, maybe i have d opportunity to say it to that lady wen i meet her.

    • Olori
      January 14, 2013

      I hope you meet her soon ๐Ÿ˜‰

  6. Wande
    February 9, 2013

    Nice warm ending, like warm molasses.

Waiting to read your thoughts on this. xoxo

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